The Story of Hope – First 1000 Words
Here are the first 1000 words to my next short story, ‘The Story of Hope’. In the upcoming days (maybe even next Monday, this week is going to be busy for me) I’ll post the next 1000 words. The release of the short story will be the second week in May. With that being said, here are the first 1000 words. I hope you enjoy.
“IF I SAW A CHILD get fucked in the ass by a priest, I’d put a stop to it! That’s the difference between me and your god,” Hope heard someone say as a man walked through the door and into the laundromat where she was sitting. Somebody was yelling just as he was walking in, and she couldn’t tell if he was the one who did the yelling, or the one who got yelled at.
Something about him was off-putting but she couldn’t put her finger on it. He didn’t bring in any laundry…maybe that’s what it was? She didn’t know. He walked across the room, sat down in a corner and pulled out something to read. There was nothing about the way he looked or was dressed that would stand out. He was bald, slightly overweight and wore khaki pants with a black t-shirt with something written on it that she couldn’t make out.
Hope’s head was hurting and she was annoyed. She sat on the wooden bench with her back pressed against the warm, brick wall and listened to the humming of the washing machines. The sound they made annoyed her, but there was nothing she could do about it. Washing clothes…one of life’s little requirements. To take her mind off of it, she occupied herself with an outdated iPhone with a cracked screen. There was nothing else to do but switch back and forth on apps, Instagram to Bumble…Instagram to bumble. It was monotonous, but she was bound to the seat for the time being, waiting for her clothes to finish their cycle.
She could always leave and come back, but this would result in returning to an empty washing machine. Apps were the only source of entertainment in this shithole.
It was hot outside…really hot. There was a humidity to the air that was oppressive, and taxing. Stepping outside this time of year would almost take a person’s breath away. How roofers and construction workers managed was beyond her. Even in the early evening it was almost too much. The humidity and heat inside the laundromat wasn’t much better. The sweat on Hope’s chest and back soaked her shirt, and the beads ran down her face. Her dyed blonde hair stuck to her skin, and she brushed it back. She could almost feel the strands of hair pulling at her as she used her hand to comb it back and looked up at the name of the business.
Falling Creek Laundromat was spelled in bold, black letters on a large white rectangular sign that hung above the dryers. Rust had corroded the corners where the screws were, and a large dent in the middle gave the impression that someone had thrown something at it at one point? A basket? A shovel? Who knows?
Like most places in Richmond, Falling Creek Laundromat, was named after something from the past. Jefferson Davis Highway, Archibald Cary, Henricus, the list was seemingly endless…and annoying.
The buzzer from the old, frumpy machine sounded, signaling an end to her first load. The second load was not far behind, maybe another 10 or so minutes remaining. Some of the machines were out of order, a testament to how run down the place was. Laundromats were the worst. For a place to clean clothes, they always seemed to be so, so…dirty.
Or maybe it was just this one.
After the machine in her apartment died last week, Hope had to get a new one, but it wasn’t going to be delivered until Thursday. That was the earliest they could get it to her. The Falling Creek Laundromat was just down the road from where she worked, so it only made sense to wash her clothes once she left for the day, but she hated it. She didn’t think she was too privileged or a goody two shoes, she just hated the environment and overall griminess of things.
Damn I have too many clothes, she thought. She pulled the wet items out and put them into a white lavender-scented trash bag. Lavender was one of her favorite scents. It was welcoming, calm, and helped her fall asleep at night. A pair of pants fell on the floor. “Fuck,” she said aloud. Oh well. As much as it sucked, she was not about to rewash it, and drying them would have to take place at home. The sound of the plop let her know there was still too much water in the pants, and would most likely need to go through the dryer more than once.
She sat back down on the wooden bench and pressed her back against the wall and sighed. She didn’t want to be here one minute longer than she needed; just being in this place made her uneasy. She imagined it was the type of place where shady drug deals went down.
In and out people came and went. The hinges on one of the glass doors was loose, allowing the door to swing past the entrance, further than it should. Children ran around the old machines, unwatched by their parents. It was a pedophile’s dream come true, especially for that creepy ass man sitting in the corner who had just come a few minutes ago.
He was reading something. A magazine? A book? From here, she couldn’t tell. But something about him gave her the jitters and she didn’t know why.
She pulled her phone back out, put in the passcode and continued to swipe through the thirsty men on Bumble. A left swipe here, a right swipe there. Cute ones always got a right swipe. Like a resume for a prominent white collar job, Hope completely ignored their profiles, as they were most likely full of shit. It was their resume to the dating world, and as everyone in HR knows, resumes are padded with bullshit.
Online dating profiles were no different.
Thomas…a cute, 34 year old light skinned, biracial guy with hazel eyes. Damn…he was cute! She couldn’t help herself. She swiped right and the match was instant.
Boom! Connected!